A minute is more enough for origin of love and _______?
Inside tn 28 w-3410 (tamilnadu transport bus),while I was on the way to trichy ,a whiz of wind along with buzz of bus sweeps my long hair back on opening the untidy window next to front steps of bus . I felt too hot sitting near by window. Bus was almost Crowed by loudmouthed college girls.
my eyes scanned each and every loudmouths and gets strucked on one like driver facing a speed braker in fourth gear.she words a black top with white lower anarkali salwar kamerz bordered by strips of blue and green which matched with het peocock nail art design. Her lop-sided straight her ends in curlies along with white tinklets of her green and green duppatta. Actually I have a principle for myself as follow: " never check out a girl more than 2 minutes,,,,because that what they eagerssss". But with the gaze of this peocock I want to violate my principle . But i didn't .i turned my head toward window for wind.
window and wind are not soothe enough after her posture. So i take next 2 min for her. By the amaze i asked myself " why can't this 2 min be extended for some more minutes?"
At the end of next 2 minute she turned her eye ball towards me and drawn it back like a "touch me not " plant. A unknown uncontrolled wry grin flourished on my right side slowly as like sand clock.
Then we both made eyeball football passing our gaze each other alternatively.
She daubed her tiny mega micro sized sweat beads with het pinky white kerchief. I envied " you kercheif ,how lucky you are ?"
After kercheif show ,it was a conductor show. I got into problem of money changes for my thousand rupee note. He refused to offer ticket saying he had no change.[ don't expect that she had solve this problem by her pocket money ,as what all Tamil film heroines does ] " sir I have no other notes except this thousand " i quarreled in please tone because of peococked girl. He said after plucking my 1000 " its ok ,,but change will be returned at trichy only" he commanded like a 5th std class teacher. I also nodded hardly like same class last bencher. " no money even for trimming the whisks ,bit extending the 1000 rupees note " he whisphered and moved to others.
on hearing this meaningless jokes she laughed without decibels. I too replied a low decibel grin with little hestitation as like heroes of low budget Tamil movies.
on facing my eyes her decibel less smile ,she tightened her lips to hide her smile.i felt myself " I want to be with for some more hours". I gestured imperfectly with inarticulated "hai". Instantly She turned other side by capturing my soundless 'hai' with her sweet symmetric mouth full of shyness.
she checked me at her left corner of her both eyes. I once again used low budget kollywouod smile. But I don't know why I did those strange stuffs. She came two steps towards me by blinking of her eyes two times.
An old lady with white varnished hair stepped up on bus steps by sudden stop of bus at a bus stop. I stood up. I asked the old lady to sit in my seat as like all boys do in front of a cute girl and I also want to stand near by her . I moved in front of her ,our eyes talked in silent mode with some bus vibrations. Her eyes along with her head lowered slightly with shyness grin. suddenly bus stopped and conducted asked me to step down so that some baggaged passengers can step up via steps. I did by facing her with her peocock accessories. After a welcoming new luggaged passenger bus started to accelerate. I stepped in bus steps with my single handed may be slightly to show off before her. Don't worry no " valaiyosai kalakalavena" song this time.time we both smiled with uncertained happiness. My long hair extending backwards obeying Newton's third law. This time our eyeball football turned more romantic though im at last foot step. I slipped my foot and got throwned out by heavy wind. I got my head breaked by a sharp edged bloody stone. I lost my cibsious instantly. Bus stopped at distance of 20 feet from me. She ran towards me and took me in her lap and called 108. Then she cleared my blood with her duppatta. " don't worry. U will be safe and all right" was the first and last word that I heared from her. I tried to say " I love u" and I succeed after hard struggles. I felt fainted and finally dead.........-
written by fictional gowtham
Dear friends a minute is more enough for origin of love and death.
"Please avoid traveling in footsteps though u r flying in what you love"
Inside tn 28 w-3410 (tamilnadu transport bus),while I was on the way to trichy ,a whiz of wind along with buzz of bus sweeps my long hair back on opening the untidy window next to front steps of bus . I felt too hot sitting near by window. Bus was almost Crowed by loudmouthed college girls.
my eyes scanned each and every loudmouths and gets strucked on one like driver facing a speed braker in fourth gear.she words a black top with white lower anarkali salwar kamerz bordered by strips of blue and green which matched with het peocock nail art design. Her lop-sided straight her ends in curlies along with white tinklets of her green and green duppatta. Actually I have a principle for myself as follow: " never check out a girl more than 2 minutes,,,,because that what they eagerssss". But with the gaze of this peocock I want to violate my principle . But i didn't .i turned my head toward window for wind.
window and wind are not soothe enough after her posture. So i take next 2 min for her. By the amaze i asked myself " why can't this 2 min be extended for some more minutes?"
At the end of next 2 minute she turned her eye ball towards me and drawn it back like a "touch me not " plant. A unknown uncontrolled wry grin flourished on my right side slowly as like sand clock.
Then we both made eyeball football passing our gaze each other alternatively.
She daubed her tiny mega micro sized sweat beads with het pinky white kerchief. I envied " you kercheif ,how lucky you are ?"
After kercheif show ,it was a conductor show. I got into problem of money changes for my thousand rupee note. He refused to offer ticket saying he had no change.[ don't expect that she had solve this problem by her pocket money ,as what all Tamil film heroines does ] " sir I have no other notes except this thousand " i quarreled in please tone because of peococked girl. He said after plucking my 1000 " its ok ,,but change will be returned at trichy only" he commanded like a 5th std class teacher. I also nodded hardly like same class last bencher. " no money even for trimming the whisks ,bit extending the 1000 rupees note " he whisphered and moved to others.
on hearing this meaningless jokes she laughed without decibels. I too replied a low decibel grin with little hestitation as like heroes of low budget Tamil movies.
on facing my eyes her decibel less smile ,she tightened her lips to hide her smile.i felt myself " I want to be with for some more hours". I gestured imperfectly with inarticulated "hai". Instantly She turned other side by capturing my soundless 'hai' with her sweet symmetric mouth full of shyness.
she checked me at her left corner of her both eyes. I once again used low budget kollywouod smile. But I don't know why I did those strange stuffs. She came two steps towards me by blinking of her eyes two times.
An old lady with white varnished hair stepped up on bus steps by sudden stop of bus at a bus stop. I stood up. I asked the old lady to sit in my seat as like all boys do in front of a cute girl and I also want to stand near by her . I moved in front of her ,our eyes talked in silent mode with some bus vibrations. Her eyes along with her head lowered slightly with shyness grin. suddenly bus stopped and conducted asked me to step down so that some baggaged passengers can step up via steps. I did by facing her with her peocock accessories. After a welcoming new luggaged passenger bus started to accelerate. I stepped in bus steps with my single handed may be slightly to show off before her. Don't worry no " valaiyosai kalakalavena" song this time.time we both smiled with uncertained happiness. My long hair extending backwards obeying Newton's third law. This time our eyeball football turned more romantic though im at last foot step. I slipped my foot and got throwned out by heavy wind. I got my head breaked by a sharp edged bloody stone. I lost my cibsious instantly. Bus stopped at distance of 20 feet from me. She ran towards me and took me in her lap and called 108. Then she cleared my blood with her duppatta. " don't worry. U will be safe and all right" was the first and last word that I heared from her. I tried to say " I love u" and I succeed after hard struggles. I felt fainted and finally dead.........-
written by fictional gowtham
Dear friends a minute is more enough for origin of love and death.
"Please avoid traveling in footsteps though u r flying in what you love"
Good going ... Quiet romantic with a meaningful end ! Kudos !
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